My Uncle’s big Secret
This is a story I wrote for French class, I used google translate to put it in English, but since I wrote in bad French it didn’t work well, so I had to fix up some stuff. Hope you like it and tell me what you think because it’s for a contest. It’s not a true story.
It was a perfect day, but suddenly everything changed with just a quick phone call. My perfect life that was worth being lived has turned into hell!
I’m Jake. I’m good in school, I play music and I’m in a football team. My parents are good people and our family is quite rich. I’m very good looking, super hot amd sexy.
It was a day in the last week of summer vacation in the evening, my parents were out to go to a bar to join the family, I’m staying home to train in football. I was in the yard when the phone rang, I ran inside to anwser. I anwser and it’s a voice that I don’t know The person let’s call him … Joe … Joe tells me that he work at the hospital and that my parents are in, they just arrived there because they had a car accident. OK! It’s enough I don’t want to hear more, I throw the phone down! I stop thinking and I throw vases down!
I let the rage in me out! I run in our large garage and I take one of my dad’s four cars and I drive to the hospital full speed! When I got there, then I was a little calmer I’m go in the room where my parents are. I ask have asked if they could hear me, my mother opened her eyes and said “your uncle” … The heart machines have become crazy and my parents passed out. The doctors couldn’t do anything! I go back home quickly before someone notices me.
I find it weird that there had been an accident, it can’t be true. I’m going into my father’s office to find some clues. I look in his papers but I find nothing. I open the computer, I could read his messages. Suddenly, my cell starts ringing, it’s my uncle, my father’s brother. A flash hit me… I remembered what my mother told me, I decided not to anwser, if I find nothing I’ll call him back. I open my father’s emails. He spoke a lot with my uncle! I checked a bit, and in these messages were threats, about my mom.
All this shit is just so mean. I continue to read and that’s quite all threats. My uncle also said that his business was worse and he was loosing money … I deduct that all this is about my mother and money … But I need more evidence, kind of the good stuff! Like in the movies! I’m so good man! I’m too awesome, anyway I look around the house, but it’s kind of a big house! So it takes time, but I have to finish this as soon as possible! I have all night, and that’s it! I look, I look and I find a safe in my parent’s room, so I tell myself that I could find a will or something! But I don’t have the key… I look and I found in a drawer with my father’s condoms ! So cool! I should take some to add to my personal reserve, I’m kind requested! OK! Focus, I got to keep my head In The Game! I opened the box and I found… bank statements, wills … YAY! and … other stuff … I look at the testament and I see that it has been changed recently there’s he left everything to me, and my uncle. I look at the statements of my father’s accounts and WOW! It’s kind really, really great! A big number! It would suit my uncle who went bankrupt! OMG! Gotta do something! Hurry! Shit! Shit! Shit! If he kills me. Everything would go to him! SHIT!
Just at this moment, I hear a car, a Mercedes S55 AMG black, according to engine’s noise, and that’smy uncle’s… he’s coming! He got out of the car and he has a gun! Shit! I close light, but he must already know that I’m here! I run in the kitchen, I need a gun. Yeah, when you have money you can afford to have one at home. My father told me it’s just for emergencies! But Hello! It’s an emergency now! 9-1-1! I hear the window of the door of our house break! I told myself that I got to go out, so I go through the garage, I’ll get him by behind.
I hear him shoot! Shit! He has a good big gun! I’m in trouble! I should have called the police… No, it’s personal I will deal with it alone! I go in the house quietly and nimbly. I can see my uncle, so not discrete and agile he makes full of noise. He’s so amateur. I scream “YO!” It took him by surprise, he shot in the wall and I shot on his hand so that he’d drop the gun and in the leg so that he will not come to strangle me. SUCKEERRR! He probably bought his weapon at doloragun but it’s a real one. I ask him what he wants and pointing my gun at him. He confirmed what I knew already, after a few threats. I even recorded him with my cell for evidence. And I tell him “GO TO HELL SUCKER! “And I shot him.
Nobody can bother my family. What do I do now… Mhhmmmm… … I found my plan, I will go withdraw the money that my father left me … Yep, I can have it because I am 18 … I’ll move to the United States with false documents on behalf of David Johnson. What do you think? I think it’s too cool! Yup, yup, it ends pretty much like this … Ohh yeah I forgot something like super, super, super, full important! IT’S A JOKE! GOT YOU! You should have all seen your faces! It was so funny!